I am partly an outline-follower, partly a discovery writer,
when I’m actually accomplishing anything. I’m very much a start to finish
writer. I have sometimes written scenes out of order, but when I do, I usually
have to re-write them from scratch when I catch up to them anyway. While I
think at heart, being a discovery writer keeps me more engaged on the project,
once I know I have something to work with, having some idea of what's happening
in the next chapters really helps give me something to kind of guide me so I
don’t feel like I’m completely flailing. I don't usually have an exact ending
in mind, maybe a vague idea, but it'll come to me as I write and map ahead a
bit.
So, the process might go something like this:
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SARAH STRONG #1
Sarah walked down the street, squinting in annoyance against
the sunlight. She hated this time of year, with the sun lancing into her eyes
from the horizon right as she got off work. Even her sunglasses didn't help.
She held up her hand as she...
(Whether I start with an outline or not, I keep the outline
beneath the actual text of the story, so I can quickly check on where I'm
going.)
SAMPLE OUTLINE
1) Sarah is walking home from work. She cuts through a park.
As she does, she sees a group of kids playing baseball. Then, a big thug dude
is harassing them. Sarah goes over to stop him, is startled to notice his
bestial features, which the kids don't seem to notice. However, once Sarah
starts interjecting, other adults come to investigate, and the thug dude runs
off.
2) That night, Sarah dreams of seeing a strange wizard-like
figure who explains that she is one of those rare humans "sensitive to
mystic forces". This enables her to see monsters hidden in the world. The
wizard gives her a magic talisman, saying it will give her power. She wakes up
and the talisman is there.
3) The next day, walking home again, Sarah is holding the
talisman in her pocket. She sees the thug dude again, this time with a small
posse. He's harassing the baseball kids again. Sarah goes over to intervene,
and she feels the talisman charge her with power. She fights the group, and though
the thug dude is strong (he's some kind of ogre-werewolf thing, figure it out
later), she is able to punch him clear across the baseball field. The kids help
her chase off the posse with their bats.
...
End Issue) Sarah talks to wizard and accepts role as
defender of the city. Maybe set up for issue #2?
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So, from there, I start to write. As I write, I might start
deviating from what I put in the outline. Maybe I get to the part where she
sees the baseball kids. Maybe I decide I really don’t want to bother making
named characters out of the kids, and instead, I change her walking through the
park to walking through an alley, where she encounters the thug dude almost
trying to mug her, only to be interrupted by Sarah ducking back onto the side
walk to take the long way home. If that sticks, then I proceed with the
outline. I know I want part two to happen pretty much as is, so that stays.
Part three, will then end up back in the alley as she tries to re-encounter the
monster with her newfound powers. She fights the monster, has a second dream
where she affirms her devoting to protecting the city. And that’s pretty much
Issue #1 finished, probably too early, but it’s a start.
Alternatively, I stay with Sarah going into the park, and in
the process, I name a few of the kid characters and they start having dialogue
I find entertaining. Before I know it, I suddenly have a three or four
supporting cast that I’m warming up to, so the park seen goes a little long.
Part two happens as I wrote. Part three sees more interaction with the kids,
and the possibility that there is more going on; after all, why would the
werewolf-ogre be after them? Maybe one of the kids is also a mystic-sensitive
person, or has a magic device the ogre wants. So I add a few more parts to the
outline to figure out where it’s going and keep me on the track. So, Sarah
helps the kids beat the monsters, and then the final part happens, Issue #1
wrapped up.
Or I just keep writing and see where it takes me. Maybe as
I’m writing the reveal of the werewolf-ogre’s motivation, I hit upon the idea
that he’s actually trying to get back something the kid stole, so now the roles
are in reverse. Now, suddenly, Sarah has to stop the thief kid before he does
something dangerous, the werewolf-ogre is revealed to be a monster hero
himself. Maybe the kid gets away, or maybe he doesn’t. From here, the rest of
the kids may think of her as an enemy and she has to work to gain their trust,
or they think she was in the right, and they become part of her supporting
cast, or they have served their purpose and are never seen again. Either way,
Werewolf-Ogre is now another supporting character who can become her
crime-fighting partner, or just a character who returns on occasion to do
something interesting.
Either way, Issue #1 now wraps up here, and further plots to
be explored in Issue #2
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So, that’s about how my process works. I used to outline the
whole issue (referring to this in terms of comic book issues), and change as I
went, now I tend to outline three to five chapters, and as the work proceeds, I
kind of just let the writing process lead me to discovery. Once I get a few
chapters in, I outline a few more chapters, adjusting for new discoveries, and
so on, until it’s finished. And, that’s pretty much it!
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